9/11: New reviews of Chapter 1, Scenes 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 and 8. I was going to review Scene 2, but Ardweden said everything I was going to say in her review. ^_^
8/20: And the new part is up! Now all we need are reviews...
8/16: Finally a new signup! Thanks, we'll try and make your stay as enlightening as possible.
4/6: Part 5 up, and the message board is back. I've tried to archive all the reviews so far, however, the message board is still a bit wonky, and I don't think I've gotten all of them. Hm. Anyway, keep reviewing. If nothing else, you can always send reviews to me and I'll post them on the page.
3/23: Finally got the queue updated. From now on the parts will be due 4 days after the previous part, like the rules say.
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|Chapter 1||Scene 1||NeoPuu|
|Scene 2||Jeff Baker||Scene 2 Review
Scene 2 Review
|Scene 3||Scott Ryktarsyk||Scene 3 Review
Describe and Expand
|Scene 4||Michael Hellenbrecht||Wordiness, Telling and Commas||John Evans|
|Scene 5||Ricardo Chirinos||Scene 5 Review
|Scene 6||Signus Megido||Scene 6 Review
|Scene 7||Montae McKinney||Scene 7 Review
Plot Twists and Gore
|Scene 8||Ian||Characterization||John Evans|
|Nobody||Due Date: Never|
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